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mple Assessment #2
Student revisions with a focus on elaboration.
Students had to change the font color of each elaboration strategy they used as they revised.
Students had class time and a four day weekend to make these revisions.
Cory Matthews:
Only made 3 revisions.
In green, he uses a proper noun to authenticate the bully in the story.
The revisions in pink are not very strong and do not add much to his narrative.
Topanga Lawrence:
Total of 11 revisions based on the strategies.
Added precise numbers, transitions, and action verbs.
Level of writing was lifted, but I hoped for more.
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Inspirational Statement
Community Context
Teaching Philosophy
Philosophy #1
Philosophy #2
Philosophy #3
Inquiry Project
Student Profiles
Topic Rationale
Baseline Data
Instruction 1
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Work Sample Assessment
Instruction 2
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Work Sample Assessment
Reflection